Saturday, June 30, 2012

Deja Vu

I have tried writing a sort of sequel/different point of view for one of my poems – Dark Angel

Comments/Compliments/criticism most welcome

PART – 2

Have you ever felt the chills in your spine?
When the night seems darker and sinister
When somebody whispers “you are mine”
You turn around, search in vain for the invisible caller

When you walk faster, increasing your pace
When you jump at every rustle of leaves
Your heart thumps loud, almost beckoning him
Your throat goes mute, when all you want is to scream

When your shadow seems to crawl towards you
When the familiar eyes try to deceit you
When you want to cry but freeze due to fear
When you can do nothing but wait for the jeer

The feeling of Déjà vu enveloping you
It all comes so true, just like you knew
Or so you think, waiting for something
Trying to think clear, your mind not heeding

What was it that you were running away from?
Confused senses, is it for real or a dream
You pray hard, that you will wake up any second
And wonder if you are wrong, when the voice again beckons

4 comments:

  1. It was chilling.. Very well written :) Used to follow your blogs in infy but chanced upon you blog now after a long time thru blog a ton.. Newayz y did u delete ur blog account before leaving?

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    1. Thank you! I am not sure which blog u r speaking about..but i have'nt left yet

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    2. My Bad!! It was Mansa Nair :) Ur writing styles are as similar as ur names :)

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  2. Awesome....Simply Awesome....
    You wrapped almost the exact feelings of Deja Vu....

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