This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 31; the thirty-first edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is 'Strangers in the Night'
Stranger, you are my love for tonight
Tell me, what are your secret desires
Revel in lust; let your senses take flight
Again and again, feel the rush, feel the fire
Need is the need of hour, just give in to it
Give up your soul, indulge in dark rites
Eager is cupid and you have irresistible me
Rearing to ride the pure pleasure tides
Show me what you have got, release the beast
I bet you it will be tamed, I will use the leash
Now don’t you share this secret with your girl
This is between you and me, our secret sin
Hearts do not matter, it’s all about the heat
Evade the rules, throw them out for now
Never ever think that you are in love
It’s all for the night, we are each other's delight
Gather your emotions and bury them for right
Heaven is in pleasure and hell is in sin
Together lets travel them as strangers in the night
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.
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This is an enticing piece!! :)
ReplyDeleteall the best for BAT!
❤Not Just My Allegories❤
Thank You Anisha! All the best to you too
DeleteManasa,
ReplyDeleteAcrostic Poetry at its best! Loved your poem a lot, particularly the last four lines are too good..
Someone is Special
Thank You SIS!! very very glad that you loved it :)
DeleteI'll say this, have always admired people who can write poetry. Best wishes for BAT!
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Thank you Deepa ! All the best to you too!
Deleteyes like SIS, loved the last 4 lines, nicely written to bring out the passion & desire !
ReplyDeleteThank You Sunil ! Keep Visiting !
DeleteWow, beauty and the beast. Really enticing. Fiery destination destined. Supe
ReplyDeleteFiery destination intended :D
DeleteThank you Maun, Welcome to my Blog !
Beautiful! I love it. It is so amazing... It's almost like a beautiful erotic poem but full of purity. Ha. I dont know what that means. But really liked it.
ReplyDeleteThe Acrostic Poetry bit at the end was nice too. Really liked your poem.
Thank you Kshitij... I am very very happy :)
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Very beautiful piece, manansa !! A fine write up...ATB for BAT:))
ReplyDeleteThank you Panchali..ATB to you too!
DeleteAcrostic? I have loved this format and have written a few poems..can you believe, I have written 55 fiction in acristic form!
ReplyDeleteOne thing..the last phrase of the last line, I would have loved if you removed "strangers" and write something which just required ''in the night''. When you pick a phrase in acrostic, you mostly break them and use the pieces in the beginning and the end. As you have already used the word 'strangers' as the very first word on the poem, 'in the night' should be enough to conclude.
Too much Gyaan..you will hate me for this, I am sure :-)
Whoa, I would love to read 55 fiction in acrostic, but in poetry wouldn't acrostic mean summing up the first letter in each line for the phrase rather than breaking it in to pieces.
DeleteI will recheck it again and Thank you for the gyan ! Really !
Nice, this is a beautiful piece and yours truly being a frog-in-the-well it was a nice bit of revelation to discover what this form of poetry was all about. Thanks and ATB!
ReplyDeleteWow..I feel real good reading you comment! Thank you Sandy and ATB to you too
Deletelust riding over love...nice poem
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT :)
i could not participate...but u can see my post here
Karan - Strangers in the Night
Hey Karan
DeleteThank You, will definitely drop by.
ATB!
Wow! Strangers in the night twice over in one poem that yet reads well as a poem. Great!
ReplyDeleteWell Well Well, In one of the Bat I remember reading your comment somewhere that you don't gel with poetry much.
DeleteSo that 'WOW' from you means a much lot to me.
Thank you Suresh!
nice manasa :) i love Acrostics.. :) u did just grt!!!
ReplyDeleteDo stop by my blog! Kappu
Thank you Kappu!
Deletehey lovely poetry i must say its difficult to write a poem and u wrote an acrostics one :)
ReplyDeleteall the best for BAT :)
Thank you Richa! ATB to you too!
DeleteBold and beautiful poem. It was good even without the acrostic. Only in the end I noticed it was an acrostic. That only made me respect your skill even more.
ReplyDeleteWOW...that really means so much. Thanks a ton !
DeleteHi Manasa,
ReplyDeleteOne of the best entries I read this time. Beautifully done with acrostic and justified well the theme :)
Best Wishes!
Hey Simran,
DeleteThank you :) ATB to you too!
Awesome creativity. Also commendable is the fact that you did not compromise on the flow while sticking to the letter pattern. Very sensual and unapologetic piece.
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
ATB for BAT 31
Here's my entry
CRD - BLAME IT ON THE DARK
I like the 'sensual and unapologetic' part!It's a bit reckless, isn't it? :)
DeleteThank you CRD, you made my day!
WOW! thats what I call 'fantabulous' !!!
ReplyDeletethe poem has been crafted so well!!
loved it !!!!
best wishes :)
Haha Than you Ash! Glad that you loved it!
DeleteAbsolutely beautiful Manasa ! loved it
ReplyDeleteThank You Jaish !
DeleteTotally hits the spot! Kudos on this piece!
ReplyDeleteThank you Richi !
DeleteA beautiful poem, made even more beautiful by the acrostic :) Superb read :)
ReplyDelete:) Thanks Raj!
DeleteGood flow!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Muthu !
DeleteWow..Adultery in an acrostic way..sheer talent..
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT
Beautiful poetry. I loved reading it :-)
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